Thursday, December 14, 2017

a Mother's Garden poem for Friday


 
To Mom's garden;
  radishes red 
 
Mothers garden, planted in spring
Radishes after the last thaw
Devil bright red and white ones too
Long rows thick brilliant leaves of green
Eat reds right there with dash of salt
Whites for in the house, dinner treat
 
Mother's garden, pride of prairie
Sweet green peas and carrots came next
Orange and strait no other be
More on the spot snacks tummy fill
Pea shelling time, fun for the kids
Canned peas and carrots cellar bound
 
Mother's garden, one full acre
Tomato plants, string beans to plant
Homemade catsup back porch bottled
Beets for pickling last all year long
Sweet corn, pop corn, she grew them both
Fill the cellar before the frost
 
Mother's garden, what could be left
Strawberries return in the spring
Rows and rows, potatoes to dig
Squash and cucumbers long and green
Pumpkins, watermelons, fall's treat
Cantaloupe too, all ground cover
 
Mother's garden, prairie reclaimed
Faithful favorites return each spring
Day lilies, snap dragons, flowers
bright. Once gift of seed companies
Rhubarb, asparagus, onions
Can't stand to leave, faithful friends wait
 
But mother's garden is no more
Volunteers and the wild remain
Rustlers come, there's  plenty for all
Some pause, reminisce days of old
Hoeing weeds, picking vegetables
 
Mother's garden gone, Mother too
 
 
 


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Sunday, December 10, 2017

"than bauk" form -- Fussy Little Forms

The Proposal;
love wins out 

I think I feel
Warm heart real hot
I realized
Then surmised you
and skies'd confirm
A long-term match
 
My sperm, we'll hatch?* 
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Poem Copyright, © 2017 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved

Thank you, Marian, for introducing this form.  Read more about it here:
http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2017/12/fussy-little-forms-than-bauk.html

In case you don't, here is an intro to the "than bauk" form: 

The than bauk form is a three-line poem with four syllables each, featuring rhymes in kind of a step pattern like this:

        x x x R        x x R x
        x R x x
One could chain together several to make a longer poem, like this:
            x x x A
            x x A x
            x A x B
            x x B x
            x B x C
            x x C x
            x C x x
*Note:
Translation:  "I love you very much, let us marry and you will have my babies?" 
                     (or something like that, I'm not so good with words like this)



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